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• 3/24/2009 7:25 PM chris wrote:
  Interesting poem.. very short.. But it's made me stop and sit here thinking for several minutes...
  I like the title.. but wonder if actually using the "Lie Bull"...for the title might not be better... because I like that. It's very definitive and has punch to it.. But you always write things the way you do for a reason.. so I know that.
  
  This looks like something that was written early on while you were in prison. I haven't been able to go look any where on your blog for a date,, but seems to be before you went to Marion..
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  1. 3/24/2009 7:35 PM Jesus Crisis wrote:
     Thanks, Chris!  I was free on bond when I wrote this.  "Li/able" alludes to "Lie Bull" while adding an allusive dimension the latter lacks: "Li/able" as a contraction of "lie able."  The horrid lie someone was able to tell meant I was liable to end up in prison a few months after I wrote it.
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     1. 3/24/2009 9:05 PM Comments from Facebook wrote:
        
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          John Burroughs at 10:03pm March 24

        Thanks, Ron, Dianne and Charles!
        
        
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• 3/24/2009 11:07 PM susan renee wrote:
  I love when so little can say so much!!!
  excellent!
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  1. 3/25/2009 7:26 AM Jesus Crisis wrote:
     Thank you, Susan!
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• 3/26/2009 10:17 AM smith wrote:
  my psychological lapels on my suit of me are far too wide and varied to be labeled by others not me.
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