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• 6/20/2009 7:43 AM smith wrote:
  it's hard to read out loud a poem that short, but you did a good job.
  
  that's why i never read my haiku in public.
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  1. 6/20/2009 9:38 AM Jesus Crisis wrote:
     Thanks!  This is the only time I've read "I Hear Change" live.  I don't like reading short ones in public, because I agree they're hard to pull off (I was actually afraid I overdid the dramatics on this one - but I also wanted to make it memorable, since I was one of the first of 30 or so readers).  If I'd known performance would be part of the judging criteria, I probably would not have submitted this piece.  But the call for submissions said preference would be given to shorter works - and the editor did end up choosing this one, the shortest of the five I sent him, for inclusion in the anthology.
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• 6/20/2009 2:23 PM Joy wrote:
  I hear that and I totally agree.
  Forceful rendition too!
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  1. 6/20/2009 2:41 PM Jesus Crisis wrote:
     Thanks a lot, Joy!
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     1. 6/21/2009 11:50 AM From Facebook wrote:
        
         

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          Christina M. Brooks at 7:49am June 20

        cool.. I liked that poem.. you should put this in the CC library too.

        
        

          John Burroughs at 7:56am June 20

        Thanks!  Maybe....

        
        

          Christina M. Brooks at 7:56am June 20

        if not this one than another... you deserve to put stuff in your own library.

        
        

          Patty Morris at 1:13pm June 20

        LOVE IT! YEAH JOHN

        
        

          Geraldine Green at 5:31pm June 20

        oh yeah
        
        

        

          John Burroughs at 6:21pm June 20

        Thanks, Patty and Geraldine!
        
        
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