Jesus Speaks - 2. Christianity
[Bear in mind I am not really Jesus, he is not me, and this, like everything, is both fiction and fact. To read my full disclaimer, click here.]
Christianity
You poison your friends against me
Then seek their advice regarding me
You warp their minds with reality
You mingle with neurotic fantasy
And then expect them to see
Through your cross eyes.
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Christianity
You poison your friends against me
Then seek their advice regarding me
You warp their minds with reality
You mingle with neurotic fantasy
And then expect them to see
Through your cross eyes.




I've revised line 4 slightly.
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been there . . .
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good poem.... got it. it's about time your writing. To me that's all that matters.
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What can you expect from a lineage that includes Torquemada & the Borgias?
It's enough to make Christ swear!
Good pome.
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This poem moved me, which is what really good writing should do. It made me very angry, as a Christian, and then it made me think. I would completely agree with your premise if you changed the title from "Christianity" to "Religion."
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mis-titled perhaps.... missing a dash... after the s...
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Hang tough man, when you get over the hill the other hill is as sweet as gold.
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