Poetry Unscene


Poetry is like
oxygen.  Why does it need
to be visible?

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  • 5/19/2010 8:46 AM chris wrote:
    Oh.. you are a quick draw artist John. I feel of two minds on this one..

    I'll come back when I have time to articulate my thoughts.

    But coming from you.. this is a bombshell.
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    1. 5/19/2010 2:47 PM Jesus Crisis wrote:
      Many thanks, Chris.
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  • 5/19/2010 9:12 AM Elena wrote:
    Poetry like oxygen isn't always visible when it is just hot air blown into the wind.
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    1. 5/19/2010 9:36 AM chris wrote:

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  • 5/19/2010 12:40 PM Elena wrote:
    Poetry Obscene
    Like Oxygen needs to be
    Quite Invisible
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    1. 5/19/2010 2:46 PM Jesus Crisis wrote:
      Maybe your calling
      poetry obscene is the
      real obscenity.
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  • 5/19/2010 1:06 PM smith wrote:
    poetry is all around us - it is only sometimes we stop and make it manifest.
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    1. 5/19/2010 2:42 PM Jesus Crisis wrote:
      Sounds good to me!
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  • 5/19/2010 3:20 PM Melanie Huber wrote:
    Because the *good* poems create substance and are less like air and more like:

    "...fires for the cold, ropes let down to the lost, something as necessary as bread in the pockets of the hungry."

    — Mary Oliver
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    1. 5/19/2010 4:14 PM Jesus Crisis wrote:
      Interesting response, Melanie.  Hmm....  Before you said that I was thinking of Emily Dickinson:

      To see the Summer Sky
      Is Poetry, though never in a Book it lie —
      True Poems flee —

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      1. 5/19/2010 4:59 PM Elena wrote:
        The Unscene poetry is Fuck poetry that is both not seen at this point in time and has an obscene title. lmao
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      2. 5/19/2010 7:48 PM Melanie Huber wrote:
        From Thich Nhat Hanh:
        "If you are a poet, you will see clearly see there is a cloud floating in [a] sheet of paper. Without the cloud, there can be no rain; without rain, the trees cannot grow, without trees we can not make paper. The cloud is essential for the paper to exist."

        So, in other words I think poems when they are "poems" may exist in words on page but they bring into mind the clouds. Without the cloud, would the poem still exist? Of course, capturing it on paper only changes the form of the poem not the essence of it, no?
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        1. 5/20/2010 7:36 AM Elena wrote:
          I like these thoughts, Melanie. When we see clouds and rain and complain we also have to realize that without both water and sun life would not exist on this planet. And if life didn't exist neither would poetry nor language nor love. So don't be in an "existential vacuum" Feel, believe and be grateful.
          And also breathe in the oxygen deeply and just keep living and writing.
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